This is an interesting product. I liked it a lot—I’d use this… so I went through your deck in detail. Hope it’s helpful. One think I didn’t notice was your traction to date, so pre release?
Slide 1: Take off your name. The team’s well-featured later on.
Slides 2-3: Combine. Use action verbs: No more stolen content! Creators get paid fairly. Platforms make money.
Slide 5: Took me a while to figure out because of the 3 pictures. Maybe this is two slides. One with a picture of the original author next to a callout photo of author, sad, then on the second: “ContentMutual recirculates article. Author gets paid.” using a callout picture of the author, smiling.
Slide 6: Simplify. Also, this is a two-way solution. 1. Platforms constantly need new content. 2. Authors want to get paid. ContentMutual solves this problem by providing engaging new content, while paying content producers fairly.
Slide 7: Love what you’re saying. I’d suggest using those action verbs as features such as “track, view, choose…” This makes me imagine I’m using it right now.
Slide 8-11: Great screenshot. When I see the deck, they look like they’re cut off on the bottom. Is that me? If not, maybe center them a bit more for visual appeal. Titles: When I see “Analytics and Monetization, for a minute I was expecting your traction #’s for the platform. So, how about this. “Analyze your views,” or “See your payments.” Again, related to author or publisher.
Slide 12: Nice slide.
Slide 13 : Seems out of place—I’d marry it to slide 6 or make it your slide 7.
Slide 14: Goes in that space, too, and seems a bit redundant. All that content can be powerfully consolidated, I think. I do like what you said on that slide. Would’ve loved to see it earlier.
Slide 15: Could you translate that into a graphic? Picture 1: "Authors place content on ContentMutual." (arrow to) Picture 2: "Platforms buy content". Picture 3: Small triad of happy author, happy platform and your logo: "ContentMutual receives 20%. Authors receive the rest. Platforms save money.” (Then, put the arrow heading back to picture 1, because authors will make more content… shows upward spiral.
Slide 16: Eliminate this slide if you do above for 15
Slide 17: Perfect! Congrats on this, btw.
Slide 18: Bold the whole first line or unbold those last two words. Take “ContentMutual” text out of that second line and feature your logo there.
All in all a great deck, team, and product. Congratulations!